- Show your commercial and the outline.
- Discuss some potential ways to improve. Focus on:
- Clarity and specificity of the claims about purpose and effectiveness.
- Sufficiency and relevance of reasons and evidences to support the claims.
- Effectiveness of the introductory hook and the closing hook.
- Overall organization of the outline.
- Each member should offer at least two substantive suggestions.
- Finally, go to ICON and revise the outline you submitted there based on the feedbacks you received.
Outline
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Flex Tape:
1. Introduce commercial
a. Flex Tape is a product made for basic repairs.
2. Show commercial
3. Summaries main points
a. Purpose
b. Au...
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